Wednesday, September 1, 2010

U & Me

Few days we fight
for rest we hug tight

Few days we irritate
for rest we remain intimate

Few days we have an argument
for rest we understand and never comment

Few days we are best buddies
for rest we are the lovers doing comedies

Few days we think mature
for rest we are ready to listen more

Few days life just slows down
for rest it runs as if chasing the beautiful crown

Few days we may stay alone not to bother
for rest we know 'HE' will keep us together

7 comments:

Aman said...

fantabulous...you have beautifully explained the cozy feeling of married life in ur words ;)
Good one dost :)

Amrita said...

hmm :) good teaser.. but i want something lenghtier and in detaillll.. do it for me come on...

Unknown said...

lovely!!! keep up the good work!!!

Philosophical Acumen said...

khmmm Khmmm.... U & Me in a very beautiful way..... but yes i agree with amrita.. even i would want it a bit longer ... sugar please add more to it.....

Unknown said...

Happiness keeps u sweet....Trials keep u strong....Sorrow keeps u human....Failure keeps u humble....Success keeps u glowing....But only
God keeps u going!! EXPLAINS LIFE VERY BEAUTIFULLLLLLLLY.....

Unknown said...

very good poem..who has written it? u or by Dhaval?

Unknown said...

very nice..i liked it..it implements to all married couples...:).i don't know why its showing my name Raman...

anyways its from Rabina..:)