Few days we fight
for rest we hug tight
Few days we irritate
for rest we remain intimate
Few days we have an argument
for rest we understand and never comment
Few days we are best buddies
for rest we are the lovers doing comedies
Few days we think mature
for rest we are ready to listen more
Few days life just slows down
for rest it runs as if chasing the beautiful crown
Few days we may stay alone not to bother
for rest we know 'HE' will keep us together
7 comments:
fantabulous...you have beautifully explained the cozy feeling of married life in ur words ;)
Good one dost :)
hmm :) good teaser.. but i want something lenghtier and in detaillll.. do it for me come on...
lovely!!! keep up the good work!!!
khmmm Khmmm.... U & Me in a very beautiful way..... but yes i agree with amrita.. even i would want it a bit longer ... sugar please add more to it.....
Happiness keeps u sweet....Trials keep u strong....Sorrow keeps u human....Failure keeps u humble....Success keeps u glowing....But only
God keeps u going!! EXPLAINS LIFE VERY BEAUTIFULLLLLLLLY.....
very good poem..who has written it? u or by Dhaval?
very nice..i liked it..it implements to all married couples...:).i don't know why its showing my name Raman...
anyways its from Rabina..:)
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